Precious McKenzie

Walt: edit my Precious McKenzie work independently to identify errors and get my Book Creator ready for publishing.

Click this link to see my Precious McKenzie book

Reflection:
I was able to re-read my sentences to make sure no words were out and my sentences made sense. I was also able to look carefully at my I wonder question sentences to find any words that has the red line under the word so I can correct my mistake. 

Next time I will use this Walt not for my Precious McKenzie but for other things e.g- emails, and writing.

My Wonder Portrait

This is my portrait about wonder and it's a really fun game because you get to shape your head and you get to choose what kind of hair you want and you get to have your own precept. 

WALT: use new words for my acrostic poem

WALT: use new words for my acrostic poem


My Refection:

I was able to find words that I don usually use on my writing and put on to my Wonder poem. What I found difficult was writing the sentence that relates to the wonder story , and just to say the wonder book is so interesting.

Next time I think that I should improve on making the sentence that relates to the Wonder book. 

John Pule Art Reflection - Meilaniah

This is my reflection on my John Pule Art that I created for our art exhibition.

Speech

WALT: write and present a speech using APPA criteria.

Reflection: 

I was able to use some of the APPA criteria by having a loud voice or using eye contact when I'm presenting my speech.

So next time I will need to use more of the APPA criteria then just using some of the APPA criteria, so my speech could sound better.

Decimal addition

WALT: use a variety of strategies to solve addition problems that involve decimal numbers.

Reflection:
On the mental strategy I was able to write my problem as a equation by adding the 2.3 with 4.35. On the written strategy I was able to expand my equation as a decimal.

Next time what I will need to improve on is remembering to rule a line under my answer.

Speeches 2017

Walt: deliberately choose words to create an effect on the audience.

Reflection:

In my speech I was able to use some of the  pervasive words and some of the emotive words in my speech.  And how I effect the audience is by having some emotive words in my speech and I think that is all I had.
Next time I should use more and more of pervasive words and more of the emotive words, that is all I need to work on.