Walt: edit and revise my writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback.
My Reflection:
I didn't make changes to my poem.
Next time I will sit next to someone that will give me good feedback. I will make sure I get a red pen and change some of my words so that they have impact and are interesting.
1 comment:
You have written some interesting ideas in your Camp Merc poem Melaniah. I agree it is important that you get lots of feedback from your peers to help you improve.
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